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Old November 8th, 2010, 04:08 PM   #16
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The most recent sketches are a major improvement. If you can keep producing like that, you should keep improving. Great job!
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Old November 8th, 2010, 04:33 PM   #17
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The most recent sketches are a major improvement. If you can keep producing like that, you should keep improving. Great job!
i kind of tried to change my style abit from less cartoonish to more srs
thanks for the positive feedback much appreciated btw do you think i should keep the main character or change him to my most recent picture?
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Old November 9th, 2010, 02:04 PM   #18
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I like the most recent one better. It's a lot cleaner. So yes, my opinion would be to make the change.
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Old November 11th, 2010, 02:55 AM   #19
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ok so ive been abit lazy and still need to finish all individual character drawings but as of now ill upload some of my older works for critique



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Old November 12th, 2010, 03:43 PM   #20
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AH! TOO BIG! Can you resize those down a bit? I really like the blue outline one though.
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Old November 12th, 2010, 06:47 PM   #21
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lol i will resizem when im bothered lol so annoyin hi res pics
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AH! TOO BIG! Can you resize those down a bit? I really like the blue outline one though.
yeh i resized em btw the blue outlined one funnily enough wsa the pic i spent the least time on around 10min

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Old November 13th, 2010, 02:34 AM   #22
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some more skethes of the main character ill post the rest of the characters by the end of the week for some reason my scanner picks uo alot of the rubbed out lines is there any fix for this?

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Old November 13th, 2010, 11:57 AM   #23
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LOL Thanks! They're looking pretty good. The guy holding the gun seems a bit off, in the way he's holding it. It's like his hand is just laying over the top of the gun instead of him actually holding it.
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Old November 13th, 2010, 06:54 PM   #24
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thanks for the feedback yeh i got a bit lazy on the other guy whne drawing him up
it seems to me ppl are viewing the thread yet only one person is commenting WTH pls ppl feedback would be really helpful
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Old November 14th, 2010, 06:10 AM   #25
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Looks good thus far! The anatomy need a little improving. (the shoulders on some of the drawings)

i love the guy with the glasses!
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Old November 14th, 2010, 01:28 PM   #26
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hey thanks for the feed back could you tell me exactly which characters have off shoulders so i can see for myself and adjust my drawing thanku
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Old November 14th, 2010, 02:34 PM   #27
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first picture: The spray can guy's right shoulder is a bit too straight. Remember that the shoulders have muscles, bones and other bumpy stuff!

Something like this:

(my tablet is currently broken, so please don't mind the crappy quality on the lines...)


Same with the second piture.

Oh, and here's a tip that really helps me!
Flip(/mirror) your drawings, then you'll see the errors so much easier!
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Old November 15th, 2010, 02:57 AM   #28
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hey thanks for the help ive een trying to improve the wayi draw people and that was a lot of help good trick with flipping anyway heres another drawing i did
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Old November 15th, 2010, 11:50 AM   #29
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Old November 17th, 2010, 02:39 AM   #30
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another character individually drawn i re did his face and clothing other than that he stayed the same
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