making a manga - Page 2

Mavin Maverick · November 8th, 2010, 04:08 PM

The most recent sketches are a major improvement. If you can keep producing like that, you should keep improving. Great job!

mike2 · November 8th, 2010, 04:33 PM

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Originally Posted by Mavin Maverick

The most recent sketches are a major improvement. If you can keep producing like that, you should keep improving. Great job!

i kind of tried to change my style abit from less cartoonish to more srs
thanks for the positive feedback much appreciated btw do you think i should keep the main character or change him to my most recent picture?

Mavin Maverick · November 9th, 2010, 02:04 PM

I like the most recent one better. It's a lot cleaner. So yes, my opinion would be to make the change.

mike2 · November 11th, 2010, 02:55 AM

ok so ive been abit lazy and still need to finish all individual character drawings but as of now ill upload some of my older works for critique

Mavin Maverick · November 12th, 2010, 03:43 PM

AH! TOO BIG! Can you resize those down a bit? I really like the blue outline one though.

mike2 · November 12th, 2010, 06:47 PM

lol i will resizem when im bothered lol so annoyin hi res pics

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Originally Posted by Mavin Maverick

AH! TOO BIG! Can you resize those down a bit? I really like the blue outline one though.

yeh i resized em btw the blue outlined one funnily enough wsa the pic i spent the least time on around 10min

mike2 · November 13th, 2010, 02:34 AM

some more skethes of the main character ill post the rest of the characters by the end of the week for some reason my scanner picks uo alot of the rubbed out lines is there any fix for this?

Mavin Maverick · November 13th, 2010, 11:57 AM

LOL Thanks! They're looking pretty good. The guy holding the gun seems a bit off, in the way he's holding it. It's like his hand is just laying over the top of the gun instead of him actually holding it.

mike2 · November 13th, 2010, 06:54 PM

thanks for the feedback yeh i got a bit lazy on the other guy whne drawing him up
it seems to me ppl are viewing the thread yet only one person is commenting WTH pls ppl feedback would be really helpful

mrkakespade · November 14th, 2010, 06:10 AM

Looks good thus far! The anatomy need a little improving. (the shoulders on some of the drawings)

i love the guy with the glasses!

mike2 · November 14th, 2010, 01:28 PM

hey thanks for the feed back could you tell me exactly which characters have off shoulders so i can see for myself and adjust my drawing thanku

mrkakespade · November 14th, 2010, 02:34 PM

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Originally Posted by mike2

first picture: The spray can guy's right shoulder is a bit too straight. Remember that the shoulders have muscles, bones and other bumpy stuff!

Something like this:

(my tablet is currently broken, so please don't mind the crappy quality on the lines...)

Same with the second piture.

Oh, and here's a tip that really helps me!
Flip(/mirror) your drawings, then you'll see the errors so much easier!

mike2 · November 15th, 2010, 02:57 AM

hey thanks for the help ive een trying to improve the wayi draw people and that was a lot of help good trick with flipping anyway heres another drawing i did

mrkakespade · November 15th, 2010, 11:50 AM

Glad i could help

mike2 · November 17th, 2010, 02:39 AM

another character individually drawn i re did his face and clothing other than that he stayed the same

November 8th, 2010, 04:08 PM	#16
Mavin Maverick Edit Demon - Will edit for food. Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Over There Posts: 962	The most recent sketches are a major improvement. If you can keep producing like that, you should keep improving. Great job! __________________ "The smartest wiener dogs are always misunderstood." Haikus are easy, But sometimes they don't make sense. Refrigerator. I loves me some cartoon violence. I don't care if I'm famous or infamous, as long as people know me.

November 9th, 2010, 02:04 PM	#18
Mavin Maverick Edit Demon - Will edit for food. Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Over There Posts: 962	I like the most recent one better. It's a lot cleaner. So yes, my opinion would be to make the change. __________________ "The smartest wiener dogs are always misunderstood." Haikus are easy, But sometimes they don't make sense. Refrigerator. I loves me some cartoon violence. I don't care if I'm famous or infamous, as long as people know me.

November 11th, 2010, 02:55 AM	#19
mike2 Come at me bro Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 225	ok so ive been abit lazy and still need to finish all individual character drawings but as of now ill upload some of my older works for critique Last edited by mike2; November 12th, 2010 at 08:03 PM. Reason: resized

November 12th, 2010, 03:43 PM	#20
Mavin Maverick Edit Demon - Will edit for food. Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Over There Posts: 962	AH! TOO BIG! Can you resize those down a bit? I really like the blue outline one though. __________________ "The smartest wiener dogs are always misunderstood." Haikus are easy, But sometimes they don't make sense. Refrigerator. I loves me some cartoon violence. I don't care if I'm famous or infamous, as long as people know me.

November 13th, 2010, 11:57 AM	#23
Mavin Maverick Edit Demon - Will edit for food. Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Over There Posts: 962	LOL Thanks! They're looking pretty good. The guy holding the gun seems a bit off, in the way he's holding it. It's like his hand is just laying over the top of the gun instead of him actually holding it. __________________ "The smartest wiener dogs are always misunderstood." Haikus are easy, But sometimes they don't make sense. Refrigerator. I loves me some cartoon violence. I don't care if I'm famous or infamous, as long as people know me.

November 13th, 2010, 02:34 AM	#22
mike2 Come at me bro Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 225	some more skethes of the main character ill post the rest of the characters by the end of the week for some reason my scanner picks uo alot of the rubbed out lines is there any fix for this?

November 13th, 2010, 06:54 PM	#24
mike2 Come at me bro Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 225	thanks for the feedback yeh i got a bit lazy on the other guy whne drawing him up it seems to me ppl are viewing the thread yet only one person is commenting WTH pls ppl feedback would be really helpful

November 14th, 2010, 06:10 AM	#25
mrkakespade NO WAI Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Norway Posts: 67	Looks good thus far! The anatomy need a little improving. (the shoulders on some of the drawings) i love the guy with the glasses! __________________ my awesome blog!

November 14th, 2010, 01:28 PM	#26
mike2 Come at me bro Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 225	hey thanks for the feed back could you tell me exactly which characters have off shoulders so i can see for myself and adjust my drawing thanku

November 15th, 2010, 02:57 AM	#28
mike2 Come at me bro Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 225	hey thanks for the help ive een trying to improve the wayi draw people and that was a lot of help good trick with flipping anyway heres another drawing i did

November 15th, 2010, 11:50 AM	#29
mrkakespade NO WAI Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Norway Posts: 67	Glad i could help __________________ my awesome blog!

November 17th, 2010, 02:39 AM	#30
mike2 Come at me bro Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 225	another character individually drawn i re did his face and clothing other than that he stayed the same