My First Movie: Sword of Greed

[MonkeyBoy0314]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3B4wolfNqQ0

This was a video that a few friends and I did as a project for english class. I play the lead character, Agito, and I hope you don't mind my acting too much since I'm not used to portraying a bad guy -_-;

I hope you enjoy, and I would like to thank my good friend, Steve, for directing and editing this masterpiece

[GreatNekoKoneko]

...Agito, hmmm. a few words. the acting is good, but it could be better. the pause between lines in the dialogue were very, well, amateurish. you can speed things up you know, to make it look and seem like its flowing like a normal conversation between 2 people i.e. the dialogue bet. Agito and Chick with Glasses.

interesting death sequence in the alley. for that i applaud you. but you made the fight sequence too long. still, the editing was somewhat good, except for the SOUND. oh man. you should get that fixed. the BGM was louder than the actual voices so it kinda drowned them out.

but nonetheless, congratualtions.

[Delta-Pheonix]

That was pretty sweet, gratz :)

I'm suposed to be doing a film for Media studys but my group are still a little undecided on what Genre (><)