Fresh Manga start up...

[kentoanime7]

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i141/kentoanime/Kenanime01.jpg
I'm having trouble, is the text just too small...

[soulreaper]

Very nice. If you want the text to be larger, you could always condense what they are saying or simply spread it out into 2 pages. Will you be archiving this somewhere?

[kentoanime7]

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n193/kenanime/mangakingofbandits_01.jpg
I finished coloring it and increased the resolution from 200-600, that takes too much data…It looked fine and printed fine at 200 but I guess when I put it up on the net it shrunk…?

[Leader Desslock]

My impression: Too much dialogue, not enough art. You should be able to break the character's lines up a bit. Also, I don't think you're using your space effectively.

It looks like you're drawing your art, then saying "this is the dialogue I have to fit in somehow". I don't think it works like that. Look at a professional comic - the space for the text is worked into the art, rather than interfering with it. You've got some whitespace that you could use to move things around. Use it.

My two cents...

[kentoanime7]

Thanks a lot Leader Desslock, I was just experimenting in manga…I really don’t know what I’m doing or I’m capable of…a few of these manga will be about me…later I’ll Get more serious and enter some good work with what you mention. I have three other more, there not all that great but it's good experience...