My art [ Shin-art wehehehe ]

[Jiyuu]

http://pics.livejournal.com/shin_art/pic/0000523p/
http://pics.livejournal.com/shin_art/pic/00004say/
http://pics.livejournal.com/shin_art/pic/00003w37/
http://pics.livejournal.com/shin_art/pic/000020ew/
http://pics.livejournal.com/shin_art/pic/000016kt/
http://pics.livejournal.com/shin_art/pic/00006a3c/
http://img89.imageshack.us/my.php?i...vass0005tc8.jpg
http://img139.imageshack.us/my.php?...vass0002pz3.jpg
http://img222.imageshack.us/my.php?...vass0008lq1.jpg
http://img124.imageshack.us/my.php?...vass0011lk1.jpg
http://img469.imageshack.us/my.php?...vass0009cq5.jpg

Sorry for the quality, my scanner sux :P

[Suki]

I like your work, and your coloring is neat.

[Jiyuu]

Sankyu :P

I uploaded them before but it was wrong topic, and i was instructed to open a new :D So i did >.<

[Magami No ER]

"Instructed." ;P
Nice work.

[SAB-CA]

Only the livejournal links worked for me, but I like what I've seen ^_^ You seem to have good proportions and colors. Lets see more soon ^_^

[Jiyuu]

O.O really? ill upload the ones u couldnt see later and thx for the compliment i do my best in the future too >.<

[Jiyuu]

http://pics.livejournal.com/shin_art/pic/000093h0/

Ehh.. Finally i finished a picture :D
It's been a long time since i did :D

[K' Dash]

i liked them especially that last one. great use of the colors. its great

[Jiyuu]

Sankyu^^
Actually i'm not used to this kind of colorinvasion [LOL], i usually use darker colors- But maybe from now on i will draw more pics like this ^^

[K' Dash]

i might post some of my art soon also.. but lately ive been working on a manga, and it still isnt complete

[Jiyuu]

Yeah i read in ur thread:D I envy u its impossible for me to make anything like a manga :D DO UR BEST :D Im forward to ur works :]

[SAB-CA]

Yeah, the latest one looks nice:) A fully original costume design, I'm guessing? Hope your friend liked it!

Now if I could make a few little suggestions (This is natural media, right? SO I don't expect ya to do them here, but just to keep this in mind)

-The hand reaching out, and the perspective on the bracelets looks a bit off. It looks more like her arm bone is broken (ouch!) at the area of her bracelets, and that the rest of the arm from that point on is handing downwards... If you change the tilt a bit more, (rotate things upwards, giving a more dramatic sense of depth) with the bracelet, arm, and hand, it'd be a bit more proper.

-The black lines that define the edge of her costume... the big thick ones that duck under her arm... on the arm that's reaching out, when looking at the thumbnail image, it really just kinda looks like you gave the outreached arm a REALLY thick outline.. which is goofy, because it's the only place where you use one. Only upon closer inspection could I tell it was part of her dress. Maybe if you made the look so that it doesn't confirm so much to the shape of her arm, but is more like a plain ole circle that loops under, it'd be easier to tell it was part of the design, and not a line error.

-The designs in the circle... they're a little haphazard feeling, mostly that circle... thing. I'd appreciate the background design a bit more if there was a bit more of a pattern to it... but that's really just opinion and personal taste at this point, so you can take this idea with a grain of salt ^_^

Overall, I like this picture, though:) A nice background symbol, god fade between purplish and bluish colors, a cute face and well drawn eyes... and nice puffy hair. I'm guessing you have some Hyung Tae Kim inspirations, considering the design and color style!

[Jiyuu]

Wow i've never had such a huge specification about any of my works xD
Anyway i figured out the arm thingy too but it was too late. It's a pencil drawing, so i can't do anything with it now :P
But thx for the advices and for writing the suggestions, now i know the weak parts :) I will do my best on my next pictures :]
And ur rite i like HT-K, as i wrote another thread but i have huge problem wth his woman characters...Ehhe.. ***** and breasts r.. omg how can they move with those?O.o And the hips too :D

[Jiyuu]

Ehhe finished another one :P

http://pics.livejournal.com/shin_art/pic/0000a8pz/

[Stari]

I did a painting like that once.

I like the fish.

[Jiyuu]

Like what?:O
U painted.. a fish ?:D Anyway thx^^ Thou the fishes were the easiest parts :P

[HallsAvenger]

NICE WORK =O nice colouring